Feb7

The London Hours, 2012

Posted on February 7, 2012 by anna mosca

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Having no eyelids
will not

.
allow me

.

to take
a pause
from watching you
.
making up
the next
lie
.
having no lips
will not

.
allow me

.

to frown
– no tongue
to judge you
.
out loud.

.

4 responses »

Tracy on February 8, 2012 at 1:52 am said:

This whole series of poems express and evoke powerful emotions with an economy of words seldom seen. Well done.

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- anna mosca on February 8, 2012 at 7:31 pm said:
  
  That’s how I want it to be, thank you!
  
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Thomas Davis on February 12, 2012 at 1:25 am said:

The compression of lines works for this series. This last one let me smile.

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- anna mosca on February 12, 2012 at 10:03 am said:
  
  Thank you Thomas, I appreciate the technical comment linked to the emotions provoked.
  
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