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Deep Sea Diaries, August 2013

Posted on August 28, 2013 by anna mosca

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sitting on warm steps
on a summer night
at a church entrance
I did not visit
.
ahead is a gulf
lit with tiny lights
trees of different kinds
breathing in twilight
.
inside is a river
restless and charged
I try stillness in vain
nature comforts me

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richardankerswrites on August 28, 2013 at 2:35 pm said:

That’s lovely, Anna

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ghostinthewalls on August 28, 2013 at 3:10 pm said:

“inside is a river
restless and charged
I try stillness in vain”

This is wonderful. ~ Bill

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theworldoutsidethewindow on September 2, 2013 at 1:15 pm said:

I try stillness in vain
Nature comforts me.

This is just superb imagery, you have a lovely way with words.

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Chagall on September 27, 2013 at 12:43 am said:

I am totally enchanted by the first 8 lines – you have perfectly described a setting that I yearn for. —–Chagall

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Lindy Le Coq on September 29, 2013 at 2:24 pm said:

Thanks for liking my post Repurposed Poems. I am enjoying reading your poems – very nice!

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Amy Duncan on September 30, 2013 at 10:19 pm said:

Lovely poem! And thanks for liking mine, too. 🙂

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Lindy Lee on October 9, 2013 at 5:34 am said:

Nature is truly comforting; nice poem…

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pndrgn99 on October 13, 2013 at 1:22 am said:

Thank you for stopping to read my work. I have just started teading your work and am enjoying it.
Alex

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adebajo on October 28, 2013 at 10:34 am said:

Thanks for visiting my blog Anna… and liking my poem too.

Nice blog you’ve got here.

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