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California Notebooks, Sept 2013

Posted on September 28, 2013 by anna mosca

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cutting sharp
like a warm smile
the early twilight
the palm trees torso then
the tired mountain eased down
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half crocked moon smiling to the hawk
open over the peaks among the winds
warm and soft, myself as well, laying
tired yet never ceasing
to expect wonders

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ghostinthewalls on September 28, 2013 at 3:54 pm said:

Excellent!

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- anna mosca on September 30, 2013 at 7:51 am said:
  
  thank you ghost!
  
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ahemmayispeak on September 30, 2013 at 7:22 pm said:

I like this: “the tired mountain eased down”. I like it as a description of the sun, but more I like it as a description of the mountain. It is as though the mountain is sighing.

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- anna mosca on October 2, 2013 at 6:52 pm said:
  
  you got it! 🙂
  
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edgarone2 on October 1, 2013 at 12:07 am said:

“never ceasing
to expect wonders”

keeps us young.

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- anna mosca on October 2, 2013 at 6:53 pm said:
  
  It does indeed… thank you.
  
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margoet on October 1, 2013 at 11:41 pm said:

Complimenti prof.

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- anna mosca on October 2, 2013 at 6:53 pm said:
  
  grazie mattia 🙂
  
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pndrgn99 on October 13, 2013 at 1:32 am said:

Nice I can feel this one simply and beautifully.

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:15 pm said:
  
  thank you for the nice feed back!
  
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