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California Notebooks, Sept. 2013

Posted on October 2, 2013 by anna mosca

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the day drifted away
as water in a brooklet
swift and eager to reach
the valley where
I don’t care
to be
.
I wish it would have moved
as a rosary in my hand
slowly slacking down at
the rhythm of each prayer
.
loitering on the light’s hues
and warm shades on beguilement
I sense I’ve done too much
and nothing as well
.
fancying to grab you head to tail
breathing my excuses
as I start all over

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katrinwordyKatrina on October 2, 2013 at 5:43 pm said:

I like that green color

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Plathinson on October 2, 2013 at 8:57 pm said:

Drifting is just that– walking around in circles, covering distance without really accomplishing much. One can never tell which points she starts and then ends. You described it perfectly, methinks. My fave stanza would be the 2nd one.

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:08 pm said:
  
  Thank you for this wonderful feedback, grateful 😀
  
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Mistress Trinity on October 2, 2013 at 9:29 pm said:

Thank you for visiting my blog. Love your work… Trinity

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:08 pm said:
  
  Thanks to you Trinity
  
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  - Mistress Trinity on October 23, 2013 at 4:01 am said:
    
    thanks so much 🙂
    
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  - Mistress Trinity on October 31, 2013 at 5:17 pm said:
    
    🙂
    
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charliezero1.wordpress.com on October 2, 2013 at 9:53 pm said:

Beautiful writing…the freshness of your words bring life to hope. 🙂

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:09 pm said:
  
  your comment brings a smile to my heart, thank you
  
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summerstommy2 on October 2, 2013 at 11:14 pm said:

Very well expressed Anna, I liked this poem, the rosary image is very poignant.

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:10 pm said:
  
  Thank you for reading and feedback, I appreciate it…
  
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Francina on October 3, 2013 at 9:45 am said:

beautiful poem!

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:10 pm said:
  
  🙂 thank you
  
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Way Words by Sterling on October 3, 2013 at 4:51 pm said:

California dreamin…, I know the feelin

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:10 pm said:
  
  🙂 yes…
  
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kdavisfanclub on October 5, 2013 at 8:19 pm said:

excellent 🙂

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:11 pm said:
  
  so kind 🙂
  
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Doug on October 6, 2013 at 8:40 pm said:

Beguilement begins on the mountain with his enchantment to the rain that falls and flows. Many streams are formed below but there are so many tributaries to the river that can be dammed and grabbed. So many brooks in so many nooks. There is one where in the shallows many things can be grabbed.

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beth wimmer on October 8, 2013 at 9:50 pm said:

wonderful!

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:12 pm said:
  
  🙂 thank you
  
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greenmackenzie on October 9, 2013 at 8:34 pm said:

Beautiful, I love the feeling of dreaming and drifting, floating down into this poem.

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:12 pm said:
  
  You got it, thank you 🙂
  
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edgarone2 on October 15, 2013 at 5:42 pm said:

“loitering on the light’s hues
and warm shades on beguilement”

will sustain any feeling of emptiness.

Very nice poem.

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- anna mosca on October 16, 2013 at 6:50 am said:
  
  thank you 🙂
  
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Ray Sharp on October 18, 2013 at 3:19 pm said:

breathtaking

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- anna mosca on October 22, 2013 at 8:13 pm said:
  
  thank you Ray
  
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harmonioustew on October 22, 2013 at 9:21 pm said:

in this poem you’ve captured an epiphany. thanks for liking my most recent post. i appreciate your intelligent attention.

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J on October 25, 2013 at 4:50 pm said:

Absolutely beautiful.

Also, thanks for visiting my blog 🙂

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J on October 25, 2013 at 4:52 pm said:

Beautiful poem.

Also, thanks for checking out my blog 🙂

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- anna mosca on October 25, 2013 at 5:23 pm said:
  
  you are welcome, thanks to you 🙂
  
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mcfcwolf on October 25, 2013 at 8:19 pm said:

Adoro il tuo lavoro. Tanti Baci and thank you for being a fan of my blog.

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- anna mosca on November 3, 2013 at 6:14 pm said:
  
  Grazie and you are welcome!
  
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Anshuman Dash on November 3, 2013 at 6:10 pm said:

Lovely verse.

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- anna mosca on November 3, 2013 at 6:12 pm said:
  
  🙂
  
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SarSaparilla72 on November 17, 2013 at 2:08 pm said:

Absolutely beautiful, took me back to dreamy warmer days. M.

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- anna mosca on November 18, 2013 at 4:42 pm said:
  
  Thank you Melissa!Glad to time travel with you 🙂
  
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