*
me decorated
with an unexpected smile
.
I now expect little and live the moment
exploring while passing over
.
I’ve quitted detaining I let
motion befalling having no
.
more addresses, pinheads or pencils
I found my self delighted
in the last three lines
.
.
“I now expect little and live the moment / exploring while passing over” ~ Yes. I think it’s better that way sometimes.
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absolutely 😉
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This! : D
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🙂
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Delighted to have found your blog and love this poem which you posted on my birthday!
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Oh, so happy birthday to you! 🙂
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Thanks so much!
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Thanks for stopping by my blog Anna, but more importantly, I want to thank you for creating such a lovely site. In my work I try and ensure that if something must be created for public consumption, why not make it beautiful? Until I arrived at your blog, I hadn’t given thought to the idea that I should do the same for my own contributions to the online world..
So, thanks for your lovely words and the [unexpected] inspiration.
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you are very welcome, glad I could be inspiration to you!
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No worries, I’ll be back. See you soon.
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I found myself delighted
How you speak of so much ease
I find myself wishing
To be cradled in your peace
Thank you
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I found myself delighted in your last three lines, too. And I kept hearing pinhead echoing. I like poetry where I am halted, and I find myself there in the lines. Thanks for that moment. 🙂 Brenda
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🙂 thank you Brenda for your feedback, glad you were halted, an honour to touch somebody’s heart… 🙂
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“more addresses, pinheads or pencils
I found my self delighted
in the last three lines.”
Just perfection . I am more then delighted by your choice of line breaks. Your stanza are just… eloquent ,quite simply put. 🙂 Do you edit them this way or is it more organic?
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Thank you for your comment and compliment Jessica… most of the time they come this way 🙂
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Thanks for replying to my latest Blog1
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Hi Anna. Thank you so much for liking ‘ Red Rose!’ Best Wishes, The Foureyed Poet.
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You are welcome! 🙂
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Hey Anna, great poem! Thanks for the “unexpected smile” … and thanks so much for visiting my blog and liking what you like! I really appreciate it! Look forward to reading more…. Blackbird
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i simply love the simplicity.. 🙂
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Thank you for reading my newest poem. I appreciate your time and thoughtful action. Happy Holiday’s
Alex
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Appreciate your visits lately to poemsperday…. and thanks for your poetry as well.
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Liked the lyrical feel of your poems!
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