not to miss
what’s not there
under blue trees
I may still
long for what
we haven’t got
but it’s too much
may not be
too much to some
but your skin is
is an habit
my eyes probe
through and past
the palm leaves
a sky embraces
all the love
its interesting how you place the image at the bottom. I think it has more impact..as the palm trees are in the last lines. good thinkin.
lovely work, too.
your heart is beautiful in its solitude ~
Thank you Tonia for your feedback. My heart thanks you too 🙂
Thank you for stopping by at my post Anna, I really enjoy your poetry and images.
You are welcome Cornelia, glad you like it here.
Thank you Simon.
Appreciate your comment, thank you
Exactly how I feel tonight
Perfect then, thank you for your feedback. Contentment is the best place to be.
Thank you for recently liking a post. I write some poetry or prose, but mostly write of my life’s journey as it has been a complicated one. It is always an honor though when someone drops by that actually does write poetry as you do! Alesia
Alesia you are welcome! Life’s journeys are complicated yes but writing is a good way to bring the knots to the comb and make life flow smoother. Keep it up. Glad you like what I write.
Oh, this was incredibly beautiful! I especially liked the three last lines! so tender and vulnerable. So happy I came to visit your blog! 🙂
So happy for your feedback and for giving you instants of happiness. Glad you like it here 🙂 thank you!