Feb23

California Notebooks, January 2014

Posted on February 23, 2014 by anna mosca

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I’d rather grasp
that which is invisible
holding it close to my heart
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that which is loud
in deep silence leading
me to a wild dance
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—- feet trampling on new soil
—- softly threading a new heart
—- imagined by many it came

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A Word from a Poe'ts Desk on February 23, 2014 at 1:10 am said:

This poem is so -it brings me back to it because you leave it off, how you leave it off. Who the “imagined by many” refers to. Very introspective, pondering, I like this very much.

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:19 am said:
  
  I appreciate you taking the time for your feedback, precise and nice. Very happy you like it!
  
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dweezer19 on February 23, 2014 at 1:19 am said:

Very beautiful.

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:18 am said:
  
  Glad you like it.
  
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delimaf on February 23, 2014 at 1:40 am said:

Excellent, Anna!

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:17 am said:
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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neopangaia on February 23, 2014 at 1:46 am said:

Reblogged this on Neopangaia and commented:
i do adore her

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:17 am said:
  
  You are so nice!!!
  
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2l2phant on February 23, 2014 at 2:43 am said:

Reblogged this on 2l2phant.

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:16 am said:
  
  Thank you!!
  
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2l2phant on February 23, 2014 at 2:44 am said:

YES!

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:16 am said:
  
  😀
  
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anonymousgirlblogger on February 23, 2014 at 9:45 am said:

Really evocative and beautiful choice of phrasing and words

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:16 am said:
  
  Appreciate your comment, thank you
  
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gilhooley52 on February 24, 2014 at 1:23 am said:

This one fills my mind with so many images! Thank you!

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:15 am said:
  
  You are welcome, thank you for the feedback!!
  
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busymindthinking on March 1, 2014 at 7:19 pm said:

Your writing is incredible. I look forward to spending time reviewing your archives. It’s nice to meet you. Belinda

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:15 am said:
  
  Belinda, nice to meet you too. So nice to read what you wrote here. Hope you found the time to reviewing archives and that you found something else you like!
  
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  - busymindthinking on March 10, 2014 at 10:28 am said:
    
    I haven’t reviewed archives as yet, but I look forward to it!
    
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livingintheheartland on March 9, 2014 at 11:34 pm said:

Love both your verbal images and the visual one too.

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 1:46 am said:
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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Parneet on March 11, 2014 at 11:56 pm said:

It’s really awesome! So simple but so effective. I can’t even think of any more praises now 🙂
Thanks for the like on my poem, btw!

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- anna mosca on March 27, 2014 at 4:22 am said:
  
  The praises here are nice and enough don’t worry 🙂 glad you like it so much to reblog it and the introductory note for it. Thank you.
  
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Parneet on March 11, 2014 at 11:59 pm said:

Reblogged this on The Enchanted Book and commented:
TAG- #One of the simplest poems I have read; #one of the best ones.

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F.G.M. on March 16, 2014 at 10:11 am said:

Beautiful & inspirational! Magnifique poème. Merci. FGM

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- anna mosca on March 17, 2014 at 9:45 pm said:
  
  Thanks to you 🙂
  
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midnighthues on March 28, 2014 at 7:44 am said:

Beautifully written!

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PlumTreeDreamer on January 10, 2015 at 7:30 am said:

You are a dashing poet!

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- anna mosca on January 10, 2015 at 9:18 pm said:
  
  Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂 glad you like my work!
  
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