Mar6

California Notebooks, January 2014

Posted on March 6, 2014 by anna mosca

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a sip of smoky
vision will you
drive back
.
I could figure
your steps
a figure past
the sill
.
once more
sweet words
a kiss for us
.
a lot not said
no to compromise
I pick up a stub
what’s left of you

.
there’s still some
fire I could use

of you do not remove

.
don’t take this spot

quit erasing words out
it’s the blue in between
what I look for

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publicinternalisation on March 6, 2014 at 11:33 pm said:

this is wonderful. such a vivid picture that implies great untold depth. thank you for sharing this.

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:00 am said:
  
  You are welcome, thank you for reading attentively…
  
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Antanya In The Fog on March 9, 2014 at 1:03 am said:

I nominated you for an award. You don’t have to accept it, just wanted you to know I think you’re awesome! http://throughthefogpoetry.wordpress.com/2014/03/08/304/

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- anna mosca on March 10, 2014 at 8:01 am said:
  
  Thank you for your compliment Antanya!
  
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Christopher Grissom on March 9, 2014 at 1:27 am said:

Wow, I really loved this…

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- anna mosca on March 9, 2014 at 2:23 am said:
  
  Thank you!!
  
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jmillz888 on March 10, 2014 at 3:12 pm said:

The way you express remembering is timeless, mixing the senses. “A sip of smoky vision” So great.

**stay inspired!**

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- anna mosca on March 27, 2014 at 4:16 am said:
  
  **I will J**!!! Glad to read your comment and appreciation…
  
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boogiestu on March 11, 2014 at 3:52 am said:

I sip your words and they warm me

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- anna mosca on March 27, 2014 at 4:17 am said:
  
  Good, glad you can benefit from them! Thank you for your comment 🙂
  
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mistermaxxx08 on March 11, 2014 at 7:20 am said:

you got flavor and vision and a eye for detail. i dig it

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- anna mosca on March 27, 2014 at 4:19 am said:
  
  Thank you mistermaxx, it’s a very nice comment.
  
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malartart on April 19, 2014 at 9:24 am said:

Love this poem- can’t stop rereading it.

malart

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