*
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compare love
to water
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in its many manifesting
ways
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solid and fluid
misty and evaporating
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going up and coming down
never ceasing existing
.
always present
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one form or
another
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Beautiful, Anna.
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Thank you Alex.
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I like this one a great deal.
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So happy you do, at times simplicity hits deep inside…
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Compare water to love
it flows, always seeking
its own level
ebbing, rising, receding
from above
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Interesting the part about “always seeking its own level”, more food for more thoughts… Thank you Richard!
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Very nice.
Where is the photo from?
I like it much.
Cheers,
Lance
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Hi, thank you! That is in Palm Springs, CA, off the main road… most of the pictures of the California Notebooks are from this area.
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Oh this is beautiful, and reminds me of one I wrote several years ago….maybe I should dig it out of the files.
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Wonderful, go and look for it, if it rings a bell…!!! Thank you for your nice comment.
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I did find it! Will post soon–shall I send you the link? If not, it’s called, “Essence of Love”. Thanks for your encouragement–much appreciated.
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Quintessential, free-flowing, gorgeous truth of love! So well done Anna!
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Very nice comment, it covers it all! I appreciate it. Thank you very much Blackbird.
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Wonderful metaphor for love. Thank you Anna. Peace ~ Michael
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Thank you for your comment Michael, peace to you.
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Lovely metaphor!
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🙂
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Love, like water, is omnipresent in its changing forms. Tthank you Anna – love 🙂
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Glad this is working Alina and that you love it 🙂
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Alina, where did your blog go that all I get now is an avatar?!?!
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calm poetic waters
flowing peaceful thoughtful
😀
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yes, peacefully, I wanted this to be simple and peaceful… 🙂
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beautiful! so flowing ❤
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Thank you!
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so lovely! so true. so cool and watery.
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I think of the strength and fragility of love. Very nice.
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Great site.
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Thank you!
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What a lovely piece. I especially like the lines about water’s “manifesting ways”. Thank you, btw, for the visit (and the like) to A Rhythm Runs Through It! It means a lot. I followed you so that I can see what you have in store! Looking forward to it…Jamy
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You are most welcome, thank you for the follow and for your comment. Hope to see you some more times here!
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Merveilleuse comparaison ! Thanks for sharing. FGM
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Thank you for your comment, glad you like it.
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Lovely poem, Anna. Nice and lean, making every word count. A simple metaphor packing a powerful effect. Thanks for sharing.
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I really appreciate your comment and the attention paid to my poem, thank you.
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Lovely poem. Love always feels fluid to me. If it is tangible, it would certainly be a liquid blue.
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Water…we can’t live without it. That’s true for all living things.
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I like how you say ‘taking less pictures’: that is a choice I consciously make. I shall say more about this in my next post. May I quote you?
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Excellent choice: taking less picture. Even more being conscious. Go ahead john with that quote. Would love not to miss that post, please send link when done 🙂 thank you
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Laguna Beach, small, used to be so hip (1972-1976 my brother lived about three blocks up the hill) nothing but trading posts, hippie shops maybe 5 art galleries, not 50, and the pick up volleyball was less competitive and more fun, and oh, your BLog brings it all back. Thanks a lot I mean A LOT. Anna
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Great metaphor. Simple, yet deep.
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We think your matching of poem with particular image has aesthetic risks, but feel that yr choices are usually fruitful within your site. We like certain of your visual/verbal conjunctions very much, and this is among of them. And it’s a solid poem without any visual accompaniment.
Might we suggest a lengthier work, regarding Catholicism, perhaps as a climax to your series, to “pull your threads together” on the subject? You’re an impressionist, we understand, but the framework and implications of the Catholic faith might allow you to drape a number of impressions across that frame, sequentially, for the widescreen effect, the big impact.
Keep working, few mortals are as pleasing to the gods as are our poets.
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