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tonight
the moon is full
emptied from a thousand
engagements I lay in hot
water maybe illuminated
from the sky comes the silence
repose approaching
hidden from light
an upside down world
a somersault and a wriggle to
find myself wondering star under
inside some lights I turn off before
the thoughts – then the eyes slightly vibrating
weightless in the space
I found within
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.
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Beautiful, truly…
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Thank you, glad you like it…
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Your poetry feels effortlessness…like it just flows from somewhere deep inside your soul…thank you for sharing it with me.
rtk
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You are most welcome rtk!
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Beautiful poem. Thank you for going to the trouble of translating it for me. I really appreciate you. Peace. ~ Michael
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No problem! (I though I had already replied to this page of comments… sorry for the delay)
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You did reply to this one Anna. Not sure what happened. 🙂
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Not quite emptied, Anna, it is still work Friday in the U. S., but aspiring to the state you so aptly and beautifully describe – great poem 🙂
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You should be there by now… 😉 it’s Saturday, a week later. Happy restful Sunday!
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“weightless in the space
I found within”
Beautiful. Mantra. Needed.
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Perfect, you got it -the space within- is key, our inward universe…
Thank you!
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I love how you say they see us upside down (:
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🙂 thank you
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The follow and the words of this poem are a dream!
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very nice, thank you
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🙂
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I like this very much.
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Glad you do, thank you for letting me know.
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“weightless in the space
I found within”
I love the idea
Lovely work Anna.
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Oop Lance, I missed you nice comment, sorry!! Thank you again for embracing with your understanding my work. Hope you are well.
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