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each flower has its own
bee for a time been hugged
and pillaged yet giving
gladly not a flower runs
away some fall in the
ditch where water
slowly runs looking up
sprinklers themselves
start a rainbow in the thin
air for me to see having
a shorter life than theirs
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leave “. Your poetry is beyond compare. h. Date: Thu, 29 May 2014 20:33:15 +0000 To: hunterdrake@outlook.com
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Thank you for commenting… may be that the first part of your comment is missing??
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Like water droplets in a fountain falling back on itself, but the rainbow lives longer. This one’s for you Anna, coming back to life after 20 years in my archives
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Fulfilling physical and Cosmological needs
Busy Little Bee toes tickle Blushing Petals
Drizzle Blessings on Beauty Flowering
Kindness attracts gossamer treats to their souls
Gently waking the Spirit budding thru need
Awareness alights, pollinates truth
With Angelic winged beauty
Being is then justified
Fulfilling them
And us
I’ll post this on WordPress sometime later on as a tribute to your posts. Thanks.
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Thank you, you found this one finally! I remember you mentioning it a couple of months ago? Let me know when you’ll be posting it on WP. π
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O.K I just checked facebook and there is a post up with mention and reprint that I posted on WordPress. But I have another one on Flowers that I think Is more to the heartbreak on which I surmise, (I may be wrong) you were alluding.
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Very pretty!
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Thank you!
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Very inspired, Anna! That’s good! Take care and have a wonderful day! π
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Thank you for the good wish, same to you today! Also thank you for the positive feedback.
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“each flower has its own
bee for a time been hugged…”
Apologies for cutting up you poem, but these lines hit me.
Could mean many many things I suppose.
Or maybe just one.
Perhaps to me it reminds me of lost youth (Yeah that is probably a stretch for some, but it makes perfect sense to me)
I need to ponder these words, but rest assured, I love them.
Great work Anna.
Cheers,
Lance
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Thank you for your comment Lance and for faithfully reading and pondering my work. Happy it works on you.
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Thought provokingly beautiful as always…………….
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Appreciate your comment Andy, happy you like it…
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love it.
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Thank you Beth π
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