I sit at the shore
with god that
world of beauty
you wish to walk
swim and dive
the land above
eyes open to
below to the wonders of
a ray of warming
Beautiful and two of my favourite things are the sea and the sun!
Me too! Glad you like it, thank you for your comment!
…very lovely…i dare suggest you add an epigraph to the poem….it brings to mindfulness the words of jesus when he said that unless we become as children we have no part in the kingdom of heaven…enigmatic words of wisdom which your subtle poem evokes…thanx 4 a good read!…keep writing! ^^~~~~
right on! you are very welcome… I’ll keep it up, thank you.
poetry is layers upon layers…par example, je t’explique pour que tu sache mon indulgence et ma tolerance sont encore plus grandes qu’avant! further up & further in….^^~~~~
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Glad you labeled this one as Wonder!! Thank you for reflagging…
nice poem 🙂
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