*
on borrowed dreams
he said we are made
with the same atoms
as the sun and the stars
that a small part of him
could have been a star
long ago now fallen
on this solid planet
yet not having
a light of its own
he was afraid he
may fly apart
anytime once
more into the
finest powder
a tear in my eyes
as I dive into
deep thoughts
he never ceases
to surprise me
.
.
..
.
.
annamosca 
beautiful piece!
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Thank you!
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I really love this piece.
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Very happy you like it.
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I love this piece. I love embracing the idea that we are the stuff of stars.
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Isn’t that amazing? Loving that idea too… same atoms as the sun and the stars, and all of a sudden we are very small and very big!
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Wonderful, Anna! 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂 (I love it too LOL)
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That’s good, Anna! Be proud of it! 🙂
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Beautifu Anna Beautiful.
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Thank you Kenny glad you like it.
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Such a beautiful, fantastic and dynamic poem Anna Mosca. I trust that you are having a wonderful summer. 🙂
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I’m Nomzi. So happy you liked this poem so much, it’s always a pleasure for me to read someone got benefit from m writing 🙂 it’s added joy to the process of writing it… Have a wonderful summer as well.
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Hello Anna, and yes indeed it does add extra joy in there. You are most welcome. 🙂
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Wonderful! Love the idea of “borrowed dreams”.
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So do I 😉 Thank you for your feedback!
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You’re welcome.
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“We are stardust
We are golden
And we’ve got to get ourselves
Back to the garden”
–Joni Mitchell
As always Anna, I love visiting your site.
Cheers,
Lance
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Thank you Lance, love seeing you here, very often in the company of Joni… 😉 You make me feel ashamed of not knowing much at all about her work. Promise as I have a little window of time I’ll read her work. I did read though pretty much of all is there from Patty Smith 🙂 Cheers to you, Anna
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Sharing atoms with the stars. Perfect.
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😀 Thank you for believing with me.
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We truly loves someone when we know their vulnerabilities.
(You left a few likes on my blog and it took me a while, but I’ve come to explore your work and it’s great. <3)
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As you see, promptness at times isn’t my “forte” either 🙂 Thank you.
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Thanks you for stopping by my site. It gave me the opportunity to see some of your work. Wonderful, just wonderful.
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Sorry for the delay in replaying, you are very welcome, hope to see you again here!
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I love your poetry. Many thanks!
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You are welcome Flowerpoet (beautiful name)!
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