*
allow me to dive
beneath the surface
of things told once
into a stream of
unconsciousness
into a sea of muffled
noises moving
slowly within a
smile performed
with my eyes as
you watch me
desiring sleep
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annamosca 
Lovely
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Thank you
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I love your beautifully metered words!
“allow me to dive
beneath the surface
of things told once”
Exquisite!
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Happy you like it! Apreciate your feedback, thank you.
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You are most welcome, Anna Mosca!
Happy Writing!
Claudia
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lovely images and cadence
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Thank you
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Hi Anna, thanks for stopping by my blog. I am glad to be here:)
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I’m glad you were here too, come back! 🙂
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Glorious poetry Anna , and haunting photo …
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Thank you Meg, I appreciate your comment. Wonderful blog you got too 🙂
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Lovely! Did you write it in English and Italian separately or did you translate one into the other? It flows beautifully. Well done!
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Thank your for commenting and for your appreciation Parmis! This one was written in English first and later it was translated into Italian. Next Friday I will do the same with another poem from California Notebook and in February, if you keep an eye on my blog, there should be some posts with the EN/ITA written versions and the AUDIO to it! Hope to get some feedback from you on those as well. 🙂
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