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I like to see
things from afar
to climb hills or
even stairs
see things in
their right
importance
little
not available
for grabs
me up there
where I should be
almost gone
totally here
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Almost gone; totally here.
That’s a great image!
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Thank you!! 🙂
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Anna, I love how the poem structure and short, snappy word choices go hand-in-hand, so that reading the poem itself makes me feel like I’m on stairs, too! The character seems so distant (“up there”) and yet present at each step.
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Glad it touched you Leigh and thank you for letting me know, I really appreciate it.
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Nice one!
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Thank you Paul!
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Splendid!
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Happy you like it Simon!
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The city is your cage and prevents you from discovering?
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Matthew, hi, why the city…? anything can be our cage, even our own thoughts, our mind can be our worst enemy…
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Yes that is indeed very true. But I think we are all of a mind or another. If our mind is influenced by mean people then it is not our fault, it is still down to us and those who care to resolve the situation. I am truly in a cage, I am innocent. Oppression, the great white man in the sky.
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love it.
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🙂 thank you!
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