Feb20

Dreams From The California Notebooks, 2015

Posted on February 20, 2015 by anna mosca

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my feet are crossed
in bed casually

as if I were laying
under an apple tree

on a motionless
summer afternoon

with arms bent
and opened up

around my head
wings as I travel

the darkened road
one deep breath

after another
to dreamland

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simonhlilly on February 20, 2015 at 10:18 am said:

How perfectly perfect in its jump from day to night, here to there.

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- anna mosca on February 20, 2015 at 11:19 am said:
  
  Thank you Simon, always attentive. It’s nice to have a reader like you 🙂 (and perfectly perfect has a strong musicality of its own…).
  
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Alina on February 20, 2015 at 5:30 pm said:

Ultimate relaxation and unity at the same time, Anna. Thank you 🙂

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- anna mosca on February 20, 2015 at 7:58 pm said:
  
  Glad you like it Alina, thank you for your comment, sleep well 😉
  
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corneliaweberphotography on February 20, 2015 at 7:59 pm said:

It looks like sky scrapers in a big city!!

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- anna mosca on February 20, 2015 at 8:31 pm said:
  
  It does, Cornelia, or big people in a dream 😉
  
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  - corneliaweberphotography on February 21, 2015 at 9:49 pm said:
    
    So true!!
    
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zbigniewsieraj on February 21, 2015 at 8:55 am said:

Reblogged this on zbigniewsieraj.

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- anna mosca on February 21, 2015 at 10:18 pm said:
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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beth wimmer on February 26, 2015 at 6:05 am said:

love it! i have nothing witty or observant to say. i just love it. (and i love the big people in a dream photo).

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- anna mosca on February 26, 2015 at 9:18 pm said:
  
  loving it is plenty enough! thank you for letting me know… (today I took a dream picture of one of these giants, must have been 30ft high)
  
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Roger Baker-Utah on February 26, 2015 at 10:18 pm said:

I thought this was a well-crafted poem with good imagery, layers of meaning, and strong metaphor.

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- anna mosca on March 16, 2015 at 10:53 pm said:
  
  Thank you Roger for your comment.
  
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Words by Melina on March 18, 2015 at 11:31 pm said:

i’m sure you get this a lot, but the imagery in all of your poems is spot on. they make me want to live in summer forever.

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