Nights From The California Notebooks 2015

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the stillness
of some nights
has few equals

owls sounds
out of nowhere
under this canopy

honeyed darkness
wrapped around
my lonely steps

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12 responses »

    • thank you for your suggestion above but it’s meant to be, and not only, a sibilant poem, so the “s” is fundamental in an onomatopoeic piece to create atmosphere when read (especially aloud). best to you 🙂

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