Nights From The California Notebooks 2015


the stillness
of some nights
has few equals

owls sounds
out of nowhere
under this canopy

honeyed darkness
wrapped around
my lonely steps







12 responses »

    • thank you for your suggestion above but it’s meant to be, and not only, a sibilant poem, so the “s” is fundamental in an onomatopoeic piece to create atmosphere when read (especially aloud). best to you πŸ™‚


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