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Nights From The California Notebooks 2015

Posted on March 11, 2015 by anna mosca

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the stillness
of some nights
has few equals

owls sounds
out of nowhere
under this canopy

honeyed darkness
wrapped around
my lonely steps

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pouringmyartout on March 11, 2015 at 11:08 am said:

Lovely…

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- anna mosca on March 12, 2015 at 4:56 pm said:
  
  Thank you for your nice comment, really happy you like it…
  
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  - pouringmyartout on March 13, 2015 at 7:26 am said:
    
    I did. I will try to drop by more often and read more of your poetry. I do some poetry here, but I haven’t done any for a while.
    
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simonhlilly on March 11, 2015 at 2:42 pm said:

Absolute.

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- anna mosca on March 12, 2015 at 4:57 pm said:
  
  Appreciate. 🙂
  
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elrondsilvermaul on March 12, 2015 at 4:37 am said:

Small comment- I would make owls singular.

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- anna mosca on March 12, 2015 at 10:36 am said:
  
  thank you for your suggestion above but it’s meant to be, and not only, a sibilant poem, so the “s” is fundamental in an onomatopoeic piece to create atmosphere when read (especially aloud). best to you 🙂
  
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cote8050 on March 17, 2015 at 9:51 am said:

“honeyed darkness”, nice word choice, I look forward to ready more of your work, lunch break now, will read more later, thank you for liking my poem. Michelle

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- anna mosca on April 29, 2015 at 12:59 am said:
  
  Hi Michelle, you are welcome and thank you for your comment and your desire to read more. There are a lot, whenever you’ll do I’d love your feedback. Anna
  
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beth wimmer on March 28, 2015 at 1:52 pm said:

so much beauty.

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- anna mosca on April 29, 2015 at 1:01 am said:
  
  You seem to be touched a lot more by the poems about nighttimes, just an impression I had… Thank you for your comments!
  
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mamtapoet on May 21, 2015 at 9:02 pm said:

You walk in beauty

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