Aug25

Being From The California Notebooks

Posted on August 25, 2015 by anna mosca

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speak out

to make a new

place in me

a new dimension

where love

sits as dew on grass

feast of the immense

simple pleasures

shared with you

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kimberlyharding on August 25, 2015 at 7:20 am said:

I really liked this today. Had me taking a nice deep breath and relaxing

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- anna mosca on August 25, 2015 at 7:23 am said:
  
  Indeed that’s a great compliment, thank you Kimberly for letting me know! Breathing deep…
  
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Alina on August 25, 2015 at 11:03 am said:

Astounding, Anna 🙂

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- anna mosca on August 25, 2015 at 12:20 pm said:
  
  Very happy you like it Alina, thank you! 🙂
  
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Elusive Trope on August 25, 2015 at 11:15 am said:

given the rest of the poem, the first line “speak out” is really intriguing, that speaking words can make a “place” for someone.

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- anna mosca on August 25, 2015 at 12:26 pm said:
  
  Nice comment, thank you for writing it. It does, words create. This particularly speaks of a place “in” me, because words resonate forever in space, so we are told, but also do resound deep within us. Give it a try 😉 and let me know…
  
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Sharmishtha Basu on August 27, 2015 at 12:26 am said:

very beautiful Ana. all the best for your book!

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- anna mosca on August 31, 2015 at 2:07 pm said:
  
  thank you so much sharmishtha, I love good omens, best blessings on you and your epublications too 🙂
  
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Valida Muse on September 3, 2015 at 2:17 am said:

Truly the simple pleasures are an immense Feast. Lovely poetry here.

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Steve Manolis on September 3, 2015 at 3:04 am said:

This is the third poem I’ve read of yours. Worth re-reading. You have an elegant juxtaposition of simple words that give your poetry such beautiful depth. Your poetry dances!

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