Dec1 Dreams From California Notebooks, 2015 Posted on December 1, 2015 by anna mosca Standard * now I know it is worries that separate me from you dark lines in-creasing may dissipate as smoke at dusk . . . . Rate this:Share this:TwitterFacebookLinkedInTumblrEmailPrintPinterestWhatsAppSkypeLike this:Like Loading... Related
thank YOU for your feedback as I was unsure about the ending but my guts loved it just as you do, that’s the beauty of posting poetry, people commenting back and entering your vision… LikeLiked by 1 person Reply ↓
Splendid expression. The use of “in-creasing” to double out the word, both paths complimenting the other LikeLike Reply ↓
annamosca 
“dissipate as smoke at dusk” I like that.
Thank you, Anna
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank YOU for your feedback as I was unsure about the ending but my guts loved it just as you do, that’s the beauty of posting poetry, people commenting back and entering your vision…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Splendid expression. The use of “in-creasing” to double out the word, both paths complimenting the other
LikeLike