I was trying to
dilate a dream
connecting deep
taking time
the early afternoon
was suddenly dark
fingers sinking
into it wrenching
walking the mind
dumbfound rounds
and rounds
sleepwalker
on a pitfall
a dive into
nothingness
an upside down
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this is sonically dazzling
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lovely comment thank you
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Brilliant, but also strange. I love this. ❤
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Thank you for your feedback Jackcollier, love reading them. You mean strange as not my usual style of writing or something else? if so it may be cause it’s not a very recent poem but something that popped back up from years ago, in a time such as this, when I’ve a hard time entering the REM phase due to lack of restful sleep and I’ve to dilate and hold on to my short dreams…
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This is lovely!
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Thank you Sahana, happy you like my poetry!
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You welcome!
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Reblogged this on Ineffably Ethereal.
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