*
may my smile
be forever loving
as I play in life
new roles and adjust
words as a tight dress
may wind clothe me
forever changing
just that loving smile
let that one survive
.
.
.
This poem appears in the first volume of the “California Notebooks”.
I love the words. Took me a bit to figure out the rhythm, an odd cut up- but I love an odd cut up. Just makes this seem like a plain poem and then shocks ya into deeper meaning. Well done
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So glad you did catch the rhythm and you love the odd cut up! So do I 😉 When you get it it’s a whole new thing, isn’t it?! Thank you!
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This is so beautiful, Anna.
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Thank you!
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