Jun19

Step 12 of 13 Ways Of Looking At A Poem

Posted on June 19, 2018 by anna mosca

12.

Cloud have covered the whole
day slowing down my rhythm
I walk as barefoot on carpet
placing words carefully
dozing off a bit hanging
poetic moments behind my eyes

2013-10-25 18.01.33 .

After Wallace Stevens poem Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird.

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Visionariekind on June 19, 2018 at 7:32 am said:

lovely

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- anna mosca on June 19, 2018 at 10:50 am said:
  
  Thank you!
  
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Ali Grimshaw on June 19, 2018 at 7:56 am said:

You have captured the slowed pace that poetry offers.

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- anna mosca on June 19, 2018 at 10:49 am said:
  
  Yes, Ali! Happy to read your comment…
  
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V.J. Knutson on June 20, 2018 at 7:24 am said:

So lovely.

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trE on July 7, 2018 at 4:11 pm said:

This is absolutely astounding, Anna.

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- anna mosca on July 8, 2018 at 8:43 am said:
  
  I truly appreciate your feedback, thank you.
  
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  - trE on July 8, 2018 at 8:53 am said:
    
    You’re quite welcome.
    
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transcribingmemory on August 4, 2018 at 8:00 am said:

Beautiful poems! I’ve read the original Blackbird poem and you have done it justice. Thank you for your interest in my blog and I look forward to following yours.

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- anna mosca on August 4, 2018 at 8:50 am said:
  
  Grateful for your comment! You are welcome. Did you read all the thirteen poems? Because I’m posting them backward as of now and I got to nu. 6 but they were also posted, all thirteen, in February last year and there they start with nu. 1. In case you are interested: https://annamosca.com/2017/02/11/thirteen-ways-of-looking-at-a-poem-1/ 😀
  
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  - transcribingmemory on August 4, 2018 at 8:53 am said:
    
    Oh thank you so much! I was wondering where 1-5 were! I’ll check them out again.
    
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