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Cloud have covered the whole
day slowing down my rhythm
I walk as barefoot on carpet
placing words carefully
dozing off a bit hanging
poetic moments behind my eyes
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After Wallace Stevens poem Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird.
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annamosca 
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Thank you!
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You have captured the slowed pace that poetry offers.
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Yes, Ali! Happy to read your comment…
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So lovely.
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This is absolutely astounding, Anna.
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I truly appreciate your feedback, thank you.
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You’re quite welcome.
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Beautiful poems! I’ve read the original Blackbird poem and you have done it justice. Thank you for your interest in my blog and I look forward to following yours.
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Grateful for your comment! You are welcome. Did you read all the thirteen poems? Because I’m posting them backward as of now and I got to nu. 6 but they were also posted, all thirteen, in February last year and there they start with nu. 1. In case you are interested: https://annamosca.com/2017/02/11/thirteen-ways-of-looking-at-a-poem-1/ 😀
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Oh thank you so much! I was wondering where 1-5 were! I’ll check them out again.
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