*
shy me lord
of what sinks me down
as I fall asleep
let peace wrap me up
my thoughts
lighten my worries
remove just
a timid smile to
welcome you
.
.
Jul23
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annamosca 
Loved your prayer. 🌹
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Grateful for your comment Sumita Tah, happy you liked it and took the time to let me know 😊🌷
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Great poem 🙂
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Grateful to you for letting me know it touched you 😊
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This is so beautiful
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Thank you! When I write poetry I like to create poems that work as Tangram, do you you know this game? It’s a dissection puzzle made of just a few wooden pieces that creates different images, figures, as you move them around. If you read this poem several times, choosing your own breaths and pauses, it will change its meaning as well as shape under your own eyes!
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Whoa that is awesome. I have never heard of that but I really like that idea. That’s very creative and sounds like fun while creating the poem. I love how changing the structure of written works can change the meaning . I’ve always loved words. I love how you can use them to mean so many different things and express so many feelings. I’ve been more easily able to express thoughts having them written down rather than verbally so studying words and meanings have always been so much fun for me . There’s so many to learn . It’s so fascinating
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Indeed it is!
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🙂
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Your method is so different. I love this !
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Thank you! When I write poetry I like to create poems that work as Tangram, do you you know this game? It’s a dissection puzzle made of just a few wooden pieces that creates different images, figures, as you move them around. If you read this poem several times, choosing your own breaths and pauses, it will change its meaning as well as shape under your own eyes!
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