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I’ve seen rain
stepping on the sea
incessantly tapping
not able to carve
ancient holes
as on rocks
because it
was welcomed
it was welcome
.
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This poem is part of the bilingual poetry collection California Notebooks 01 Β on sale on Amazon.
Enjoy your website thank you for sharing πΈπππππΊπ§π»ββοΈππ§π»
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You are most welcome Kindness, loved to read and see your joyful message πΈπ±πΈππ
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Beautiful! Hope you’re having a good day!!
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Thank you! I am, hope the same for you! This is the opening poems of my book California Notebook, a collection of poems written in the desert of Southern California…. maybe knowing this will shed a different light on the poem…!
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Oh, wow! That does change the feeling a bit! I wish the best for you! You’re a pretty amazing poet π
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Thank you for your wish and feedback, all the best to you too! πΈ
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Loved this
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Happy you do Muntazir, thank you for letting me know!
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Lot of spirit in this. I always think of rain drops as tiny explosions…
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Thank you for sharing, nature, and how we perceive it and let it speak to us, is truly a great mystery!
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Just beautiful! I truly enjoyed it! β¨
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So happy you like it! Thank you for lettino me know… π
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Yes, I really do! And of course, you’re most welcome! π
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