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California Notebooks, Dec. 2013

Posted on January 22, 2014 by anna mosca

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I remember well

the route of the skies

I may be on clouds

as you said

I may not need

to tread on soiled

divorced paths

the air is thin above

and the view is fine

I wish my wings back

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Miep on January 22, 2014 at 12:51 am said:

So do I, so do I.

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- anna mosca on January 22, 2014 at 7:36 am said:
  
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Carluh Vicknair on January 22, 2014 at 6:46 am said:

Reblogged this on lucidfloetry and commented:
A Wonderful poem. Classic. It’s refreshing to see talent. Kudos to miss Anna Mosca!

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- anna mosca on January 22, 2014 at 7:35 am said:
  
  Thank you indeed for re-blogging and feedback!
  
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  - Carluh Vicknair on January 22, 2014 at 7:37 am said:
    
    Thank you for sharing. It’s very easy to read, at the same time profound. I appreciate your work! 🙂
    
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jcrotty2013 on January 22, 2014 at 3:53 pm said:

I am really diggin California Notebooks. You wouldnt be opposed to me sharing a few would you? And if I saw these poems in a book on a shelf of a store i would purchse the whole lot and pass em out for free.

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- anna mosca on January 22, 2014 at 5:07 pm said:
  
  Thank you 🙂 for your enthusiasm, I’m glad you like them!
  No problem for sharing them, I will be glad if you do. Make sure, if you share them on your blog, that you put the link (yours) under each post shared or, if on FB, that you copy paste the whole link of my post/page. It’s important that the name of the author will be visible. This way you are not infringing any copyright and we are both happy 🙂
  Will let you know when the whole is out on print (there’s more to come, stay tuned)!
  Appreciate your input.
  
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jjarvis92014 on January 25, 2014 at 7:43 am said:

I appreciate you reading my haiku and I really appreciate your poems. They are lovely.

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burlwhitman on January 25, 2014 at 4:21 pm said:

This poem has a center and lots of space in it. I like it very much.

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Kwadwo on January 25, 2014 at 5:39 pm said:

We could all do with some time among the clouds, where we do not tread among thorns and thistles on the ground.

Love the poem.

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LAMarcom on February 5, 2014 at 2:50 am said:

I love this poem. When I read it, I suddenly had thoughts of Joni Mitchell’s album “Hejira”.
Beautiful work.

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- anna mosca on February 8, 2014 at 7:10 am said:
  
  Thank you, will have to check it out, my shame not being familiar with it…
  
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