Oct3

California Notebooks – Trust

Posted on October 3, 2017 by anna mosca

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driving in the dark

surrounded by fog

better use trust
the season has come

plowing the clouds

to unveil the land
suspended in

to everlasting

radiance
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Alan J. Blaustein on October 3, 2017 at 9:41 am said:

Excellent free-verse poem! The metaphor comes clearly to me, parting the clouds to reveal the radiance below, clearing the clouds from your mind to see your own radiance.

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- anna mosca on October 3, 2017 at 11:23 am said:
  
  Excellent point of view revealed in your comment Alan, it makes me so happy when verses and poetic intentions are clear to readers, thank you.
  
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