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Rain From The California Notebooks

Posted on October 24, 2017 by anna mosca

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I’ve seen rain
stepping on the sea
incessantly tapping

not able to carve
ancient holes

as on rocks
because it

was welcomed
it was welcome

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1 Big 2 GNQY7515 copy OK

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This poem is part of the collection California Notebooks

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Rishabh mishra on October 24, 2017 at 7:35 am said:

very well written !!
have a look at my poem too , u will like them!!
visit : https://bleedingthoughtsweb.com/2017/10/06/first-blog-post/

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simonhlilly on October 24, 2017 at 9:31 am said:

Very neat, and lovely image too.

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- anna mosca on October 24, 2017 at 11:10 am said:
  
  Thank you Simon! Always nice to read your feedbacks 😊
  
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Alan J. Blaustein on October 24, 2017 at 10:03 am said:

I was watching rain run over the gravel in my yard, and I immediately connected with the vivid, beautifully written imagery of your poem. The trees and greenery here seem to be welcoming the rain.

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- anna mosca on October 24, 2017 at 11:12 am said:
  
  Alan, so nice to read your comment, to learn that my poem came alive to you, that’s joy!
  
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