California Notebooks, January 2014

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we are here
softly abandoned

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glaring at the shadow of
an airplane on the ground

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one of those luminous day
where every detail is out

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for count and thanksgiving
following a time dark as

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the night upon which we
both struggled with

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eyes wide open to
no avail in fear

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2013-12-26 11.26.10

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    • it does talk about intimacy… sorry you feel this way, on the contrary I have a hard time with pen and paper… I keep all my notes and journal on my iphone, it’s my small treasure box, just as much as my sketch book use to be 🙂

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  1. We are softly abandoned when looking down upon casted shadows from a distance, with the only clarity being that fear that never makes us comforted. I love the writing and I got something from it, so thanks for sharing your work of art. 🙂

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  2. I read this aloud a few times to get the full benefit. I hope my recitation didn’t mangle it.
    Beautiful work, this.
    And I have to agree with Cornelia’s comment: “So Californian.”

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